The Process (Part Two)

Carrying on from last week, here’s what happens once a book’s past the first draft stage.

Step Four: Waiting for Edits (1-2 Months)

After I send off the first draft to my editors and beta readers, I can relax a bit.  This is the closest I get to being on holiday, and it’s generally the only time in a book cycle when I’m genuinely not working.  While I’m in the first draft stage, I typically work 7 days a week for the whole 6 months – as a result, by the time I send the manuscript off, I’m often quite exhausted and drained.  It takes me a month or so to recharge the batteries.  After 3-4 weeks, I’m rested and usually ready to get back to work.

Unfortunately, this stage also marks the end of the point where I have full control over the timing of things.  Part of the reason I’m relaxing and doing nothing in this stage is that I’m waiting on my editors to send me their first-stage edits.  If I’m lucky, they’re working away on the edits and I’ll receive them after a month or so.  If I’m unlucky, the edits are sitting under a pile of work, or in my editor’s inbox, or are bouncing around in limbo between various email accounts.  Until I get them, there’s not much I can do but sit around.

In the case of Hidden, I got the editorial report from my UK and US editors on August 7th, a little over 5 weeks after submitting the manuscript.

Step Five: Edits (??? Months)

A novel delivered to the publisher typically has three to four major stages of editing, and the first-round edits are the biggest and longest.  This is where your publishers tell you how much they liked the book, followed by all the things they want you to change.  If you’re lucky, the suggested changes are things like “This character’s great, can we have more of him?” or “Hey, maybe you should cut out some of the world-building details so we can jump into the action quicker.”  If you’re unlucky, it’s stuff like “I’m just not sure I found the supernatural elements in this story really convincing.  What if you set the book in a traditional boarding school instead of this ‘Hogwarts’ place?  Oh, and if you could change the sex of the main character, that’d be great.”

It probably shouldn’t come as a surprise that waiting for edits can be somewhat stressful.

Once the email with the editorial report arrives in my inbox, the holiday’s over.  My first job is to decide how I’m going to respond to their suggestions, followed by getting in touch with them to agree on what the changes are going to be.  Once that’s been agreed, I’ll get to work on the edits themselves.  This step can take anywhere from a few weeks to a few months, depending on the size of the changes.

Hidden had a difficult edits stage.  The first stage of the process ended up taking a good two and a half months, the first couple of weeks of which was negotiation and discussion, and the rest of which was the writing itself.  After that I spent a further couple of months on a second-round edit, with yet more discussion and yet more edits.  The final version didn’t get sent back to my publishers until the last week of 2013.  Although the end result was a much better book, it was a lot of work and made it difficult to make a start on Alex Verus #6.  I couldn’t easily start the next book until I’d settled what was happening in this one, and as a result I didn’t begin writing Alex Verus #6 until several months after its original hoped-for start date.

It’s also usually somewhere during the edits that a title gets decided.  Prior to this stage, the manuscript of Hidden was being sent around with the title of ‘Alex Verus #5′.

Step Six: Waiting for Copy-Edits (1-2 Months)

Once the publishers have decided that they like the basic structure of the manuscript, they’ll shunt it off to a copy-editor for the next stage.  Again, there’s not much I can do during this process, but unlike Stage Four, this isn’t a holiday – typically by this stage I’ve started work on the next book.

The amount of time I spend waiting for the copy-edits depends on the publisher’s schedules, which in turn depends on how much time pressure they feel they’re under.  If the book looks like it’s easily going to hit its publishing slot, they’re not going to be all that hurried about it.  If time’s tight, they’ll set a stricter deadline on when the copy-editor has to deliver, and they’ll pressure me to complete the copy-edits faster in turn.  In this case, since the edits for Hidden had taken so long, there wasn’t much time to spare, and the copy-edits were delivered to me exactly a month after I’d sent them the edited manuscript.

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The Process (Part One)

Alex Verus #7 is underway, and about 10% complete.  The book’s coming along nicely (and currently ahead of schedule) but there’s no immediate news to share, so for this week’s post I thought I’d write about a more general topic instead.

One of the most common questions I get asked is “When’s the next book coming out?”  I always hate answering it, because when I tell people that the next book is finished, they get all excited and expect to be able to read it soon.  Then I have to watch their faces fall when I explain that it’s going to be a full year before the book hits the shelves.  (Okay, most of the time I don’t actually see their faces fall, since I’m doing it over the internet, but you get the idea.)  It’s generally not immediately obvious to the casual observer why it takes so long for a novel to go from manuscript form to purchasable book, so to try and explain it a little better I thought I’d write up the process.  If you’re interested in how a book gets made, this might give you a little idea of the nuts and bolts of the profession.  If not, it’ll hopefully at least explain why the books seem to take so long to get written.

So here’s the journey that an Alex Verus novel goes through, from conception to the bookstore.  Each step is accompanied by a rough estimate of how many months it takes.  For our guinea pig, the book we’re going to track on its course is Alex Verus #5, Hidden.

Step 1: Idea (??? months)

The little acorn from which the oak tree grows.  All writers collect story seeds, fragments of ideas with the potential to become something more.  In rare cases, they get turned into a book.  More often, they gather dust in a notebook or computer file somewhere.

In the case of Hidden, the initial idea was basic:  do something involving Anne’s past.  This was floating around in my head sometime back in 2012, before I’d even finished with Chosen.  And then it sat and waited, until Chosen was written and the Chosen edits were completed and I had time for something more.

Step 2: Planning (1-2 months)

Some writers can improvise an entire book from scratch, but I’m not one of them.  I need some sort of plan in place before I’m really comfortable sitting down to get started, and the more of an idea I have of what I’m going to write, the better.

The way in which I do plans has changed over the years.  For the early Alex Verus novels I’d draw out detailed plans on A4 sheets, with timelines and events in contrasting colours.  Nowadays my notes are much shorter and more piecemeal, shifting as the plan does.  Hidden’s notes were mostly written on a file on my computer and probably wouldn’t have made much sense to anyone but me.  From the beginning, I knew that there were two plotlines from Chosen that I really wanted to continue and develop:  Richard’s return, and the mystery of Anne’s past.  Everything else developed from there.  I began laying the details of the plot of Hidden in November 2012, and by the end of December 2012 I had a clear enough idea of the book’s early sections to start writing.

Step 3: First Draft (5-7 months)

The longest part and generally the hardest.  When I give percentage updates on my blog, this is usually the bit I’m talking about.

My Alex Verus novels are around 90,000 words in length.  Counting editing time, this means that if I average a little over 500 words a day, I can write a book from beginning to end in 6 months.  In Hidden’s case, the official starting date was January 1st 2013, and the deadline was June 30th 2013.  I made it with a day or so to spare.

With the manuscript done, you’d think that the worst was over.  It is, but there’s still a lot to do before the book can hit the shelves.  More on that next week.

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Ask Luna #39

From: Leon

Hi Luna
A long time watcher here from New Zealand- and that is not meant to be creepy, honest.
So I had a couple of questions:
Firstly how much of a super hero did you feel when you got to save Alex for the first time? Did you ask him to give you a special code name?

Secondly does anyone know anything about Richard’s magic association (family? Powers? Ok that last one is all superhero again. What is the correct phrasing?)

That long-term-watcher line made me think of The Avengers. ‘I watched you while you were sleeping, wait, that came out wrong.’ Did anyone else think that? Okay, so just me.

Saving Alex was pretty awesome. I don’t think I’ve ever told Alex, but back in the first year or two, I felt really useless a lot of the time. I mean, he was a full mage, and all I had was this stupid curse that didn’t do anything but hurt me. It felt like he was always having to rescue me and explain everything. So getting to the point where I could actually save him . . . yeah, that felt good. I like being competent. It’s nice.

Re: Richard, it’s ‘family’ for the general branch (elemental, living, or universal) and ‘type’ for the specifics (fire, earth, life, divination, etc). And no, we don’t know, though we’ve done a bit of guessing.

From: Kyle(TheJugglingBard)

Hey Luna, quick question about Alex’s magic. Lets say, for example, Alex is fighting a boxer. A boxer who has been boxing for a long time. This boxer would react mostly on muscle memory. He would see a punch coming and his body would move and react accordingly, without him ever (consciously, at least) deciding to move that way. Would Alex be able to see his reactions coming? Also, wouldn’t that be a fantastic way for him to sharpen his immediate danger “radar”?

Not only can Alex do that, from what he’s told me, that’s exactly what he DID do back when he was training up his defensive precognition. He says more skilled fighters are less predictable, but all of them fall into habits. Doesn’t just apply to boxing, either. The more time I spend duelling, the more I notice the same thing happening with duellists. If you pay attention you can start to guess the move before it comes, and you don’t have to be a diviner to do it.

From: Wodden

Dear Luna,

Once again, thank you for your response to my enquiries.

If you could spare the time, I wonder if you could elaborate a bit on “international magic politics” for me.

You said that there are “power blocs” and alliances between national magic councils – to what extent do they mirror mundane alliances? Are the US and UK close magical allies as they are in the normal, visual world? Are there any unusual relationships that fly counter to any expectations that may be founded on mundane world experiences?

On a related note, when the mundane powers come to blows, how do the national councils react? Is there any feeling of nationalism or patriotism to the mundane state? Or is it an individual choice with the council in question remaining “neutral”?

For example, in WWII, did Allied mages take the field on a national basis , on a council basis, or did they avoid the conflict? I would assume that if they did get swept up in the wars of nations, the lines between Light and Dark would blur further, eclipsed by mundane national interest. Would this be accurate?

I apologise for distracting you from your own studies in this way, but I am of an historical bent and tend to get fixated on such things. Your indulgence is appreciated.

Yours Faithfully,

Wodden

Ugh, you are seriously pushing the limits of how much I know here. I just don’t spend that much time on international magical politics. I mean, it’s not the same as for normals, you can’t just look up the BBC website and find out what the news is and which countries have signed a treaty and who’s fighting with who. Most of this stuff is secret. I know there are a few websites that cover it, but the ones that are any good aren’t public and I don’t have access.

Okay, so based on the very little that I DO know – and don’t take any of this as gospel, by the way, since I’ve no idea how accurate it is or whether it’s out of date by now – they mostly mirror relations in the normal world, except when they don’t. The British and North American Councils get on pretty well. They have exchange programs and stuff. With the European Councils it’s a bit more murky, and it changes more. I think the European Councils get on less well with each other. As for the rest of the world, we get on decently with the Middle Eastern Councils, badly with the African ones, and with the Asian ones there’s kind of a you-don’t-come-here-we-don’t-go-there thing. They’ve been opening it up a bit but it’s still not friendly.

As for World War II, it was really really complicated. The Gate Rune War was going on at the same time and some mages were fighting along national lines and some were fighting along Light-Dark lines and it was a huge mess. You’d have to ask an actual mage historian if you really wanted to learn about that.

From: sheyd

has anyone ever called richard dick? and if yes, did he die in a painful way?

Oh, sure, I’ll get right onto finding that out for you. I’ll go trek out to Richard’s mansion, get past the various psychopathic Dark mages and other associates he’ll have hanging around him, all so I can ask him a question about a stupid pun on his name. I’ll just go do that now, shall I?

Honestly. How do you guys think I find out this stuff? It’s not like I know everything, I do have to get it from somewhere.

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Endings and Beginnings

Alex Verus #6 is done!  The edited version was sent off to my publishers last week;  there are copy-edits and proofreading still to do, but for the most part, the manuscript sitting on my computer now is the same one that you guys will be reading next year.

And with that finally out of the way, I’ve started work on Book #7.  Wrote the first paragraph yesterday, should have the first page done by tonight.  I’m aiming to finish this one the end of March – let’s see if I make it!

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Ask Luna #38

From: Wodden

Dear Luna,

Thank you for your most kind responses to my questions over the last two weeks. I am much more enlightened.

Going back to utilising ambient air moisture for certain ice and water effects, does this mean that in environments of zero (or extremely low) ambient moisture, ice and water effects would be limited to energy-only effects?

And an unrelated question, but are there mages which control and communicate with the natural world (animals and plants)? And if so are they more a specialisation of Mind mages than anything else? Do they see themselves as universalists or living mages?

Indeed, I suppose I could ask if that, if one was to conceive of a given magical skill set/focus, is it possible that it exists somewhere? So a Sand Mage, Animal whisperer, Shadow Mage etc?

And one final question (an please feel free to ignore any/some when answering):

With regards “National Councils” of Mages – what are the relations between them? Do “alliance blocks” exist, and is there ever open conflict between them? Was the last Light-Dark war a “world war” or just one limited to the UK (possibly also those with descendant/analogous council mechanisms, like the US, Australia etc)?

Thank you once again for your patience and indulgence. I have taken up more than enough of your time.

You’re very polite. I kind of like it.

Yes, ice and water mages are a lot more limited in what they can do in really arid environments. One of the reasons they don’t like hanging around them. Though usually they just get really good with energy-only spells to compensate.

And yes, there are animal and plant specialists. Some of them overlap with shapeshifters, others are called nature mages or druids. You tend to get less of them here in the big cities, for obvious reasons. They’re classified in the living family.

As for relations between the national Councils . . . oof, that’s a hard one. Yeah, there are alliance blocks, and yeah, there are disagreements and sometimes fights, and it’s really really complicated. There haven’t been any serious Light-vs-Light battles for a long time, though. The last few wars (including the big one) were basically Dark-vs-Light, though the sides were pretty mixed up. And yes, the Gate Rune War was a world war, not a local one, though there haven’t been any shortage of local wars in mage history either.

From: Geli

Hi Luna,

first of all thank you for answering my last question if Richard “changed” Alex. I’m still thinking about the topic, and I’m wondering…
Alex is clearly a lot more combat orientated and more willing to enter fights than pretty much any other diviner. The thing that stands out is, that Alex seems to use his divination *best* within a combat situation. He’s not bad outside of battle, but it’s within he excels. So I wanted to ask, could it be that outside of fights and labyrinths/decoding, Alex is pretty much inexperienced? After all, Richard is definitely no diviner and Alex didn’t seem to know if his nightmares are about the future or not. Also, let’s face it, for a diviner Alex gets “danger warnings” on a really short notice, while during the first adventure every other diviner in the whole country was already in hiding.

Wish you a great day!

Good question. I don’t honestly know, since the only diviner I really know anything much about is Alex, but my guess is that because of Alex’s history he’s ended up getting a lot better with combat divination than’s usual for a diviner – most of them are more likely to spend all their time making sure they never get anywhere near a fight in the first place.

The thing with his nightmares is weirder. Apparently some diviners can get warnings and prophecies through dreams – I asked Alex about it once and he says he goes in for the Apollonian style and not the Dionysian one, whatever that means. Still, oneiromancy is supposed to be a diviner thing, so maybe he can do that too, who knows . . .

From: Aguido

Has anybody tried harvesting imbued objects? I’m wondering whether the side effects are inherent to the process, or only arise when there’s a mind on the other side…

I am NOT looking Harvesting up in the encyclopaedia. Who even wants to know about that stuff?

From: John D.

Dear Luna,

After reading the latest adventure, I got a little confused with regards to how focus items work. Originally, my understanding was that focus items didn’t actually carry any magic of their own – a one-shot had a single spell they could use, and an imbued item had a range of lasting powers that could be called upon, but I thought that focuses only worked for mages with a particular specialty (for example, a Water focus required Water magic, or a type that included Water in its purview such as Storm, and acted to help “shape” the magic rather than execute an effect). That was my understanding when your “ex” in the “Cursed” case (sorry for bringing him up…) was looking for an Imbued item – since he couldn’t use a specific type of magic, he couldn’t use focus items.

However, in Hidden, there was that tea cup that made everything taste like chili, which Alex said was a water-type focus, but implied that it would work for potentially anyone – if a mundane was to put water into that cup, it would taste like chili to them.

So are focus items capable of executing a spell or set of spells repeatedly for anyone, or am I missing something (i.e. the person has to be able to use magic already)?

You basically had the right idea to begin with. Focus items can’t actually create effects off their own bat, they need an energy source. So the standard way you use them is that you channel energy into them, and they convert that into whatever particular spell that focus is designed to produce.

One of the ways mages have come up with to work around that is ambient focuses. Ambient focuses are designed so that they can automatically draw in energy from the area around them, kind of like water draining down a sink – the idea is that they feed off the ambient magic in an area, or in a person. That’s how that teacup works. It’s meant to feed off a person, preferably a mage. So a mage could make it work in only a few minutes, just by being around it. An adept might take twice as long, a normal or sensitive would probably take more like an hour, and if it’s on its own in an empty room it wouldn’t work at all.

The problem with ambient focuses is that the amount of energy they draw is really low compared to direct-channel ones, and since there’s no-one actually guiding the spell it has to be very crude. Fine for flavouring a drink, pretty useless in a fight.

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Ask Luna #37

From: drizztmajere

Hey Luna,
I am glad to see that Anne and Alex are friends again and that he finally has a focus for dealing with his opponents pesky shields. My question for you is I realize that Alex has a healthy fear of Richard but why hasn’t he used his divination to help him identity what his opponents can do especially with Richard and Morden, because it seems like he is going to need all the knowledge he can get going forward to survive those two and Levistus?

With Morden we already know what the guy can do – he’s a death mage and a really powerful one.

Richard’s harder, because he’s passing – that means he keeps his magic type a secret. Not something that you can get away with in Light circles because they know too much about each other, but a few Dark mages do it. We’ve talked about finding out more, but it’d mean getting up close and personal with Richard, which Alex (funnily enough) isn’t very keen on doing.

The thing is, with guys like this, just figuring out what they can ‘do’ in a physical/magical way isn’t as much help as you’d think, because the real reason they’re so dangerous is their influence. Yes, they can blow you up face to face, but they’re more likely to make a phone call and have someone else drop a building on you while you’re asleep.

From: rena

Hey Luna! Okay about alex’s dreams. Is it me or are the visions getting stronger? Also do you feel it is hard for Alex to tell between vision and dream or do you feel he is in denial? Also did Natasha/Natalie get her comeuppance for attacking you at containers?

Which visions? You mean those trips he takes to Elsewhere? I’m not sure they’re any stronger, it’s just that he’s better at navigating the place. Though better him than me, to be honest. I really wouldn’t want to go back there.

As for Natasha . . . not really. Alex paid a visit to her master, but by the time I was back in London Natasha had been pulled out of all the classes I shared with her and she’s hardly ever been in the same room as me since. So I don’t know what Alex told her master, but it made an impression. I really, really wanted to go after her but Alex flat-out ordered me not to (and when I tried anyway he stopped me). I’m not going to go chasing her, but I’m still hoping to get a shot at her someday.

From: Anton

Hey Luna,
I was wondering, what exactly are wards? How in what ways are they used and can any mage (i.e. Alex) create them? Can you ward yourself?

A ward’s just a spell that’s been placed on a location. Usually when mages talk about them, they mean some kind of protective spell, like something to stop gates or scrying. Alex can’t make them because of how his magic works, and the times that I’ve tried it’s never worked, either.

From: Anton

Hey, Luna a question about imbued spells. It seems as if you can imbue anything with a spell. Constructs, items, an animal (blink fox) and even people (like possibly your curse) My question is, do mages ever imbue themselves in order to use magic they other wise couldn’t like a force mage imbued with lifesight or a mage using a imbued space spell to create an effect similar to “Captain America’s” Storage spell.

You’re mixing up a few different things. Imbued items are a really specific type of top-end magic item that can use magic in its own right because its basically alive. Constructs are completely different – they’re not alive at all, they’re just machines that follow a set of programs. And magical creatures like blink foxes aren’t imbued at all, their magic’s innate, just like your arms and legs.

Putting a spell on someone else is a different thing again. You can do it, but it doesn’t necessarily last and the energy has to come from somewhere. I’ve never heard of a force mage being imbued with lifesight, and I think it wouldn’t really work. The closest you could get would be some kind of focus that did it for him (like a set of goggles or something).

From: Bedragon

hey luna
just wondering it has been said that theoretically time mages can remove certain things from the timeline is it true also if a time and pace mage work together cane they do time travel

Dude. Spelling and punctuation.

Yeah, time mages can remove stuff from the timeline. I think it’s usually temporary, though. Basically, it’s short range future time travel. They make something go a little way into the future. Some people say that they can take stuff out of the timeline completely, but it’s kind of hard to tell whether they’re actually doing that or whether they’re just sending it far enough into the future that no-one can tell the difference.

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Between Books

A general update on the state of the Verusverse:

Right now I’m spending my time finishing up the edits for Alex Verus #6 (which, yes, has a title, but I’ll wait to announce it a little longer).  I’m about 80% of the way through, and should be done in another week or so.  Luckily this book hasn’t needed anything like the rewrite that Hidden did, so I don’t have too much more work to deal with.

Once that’s done, I’m finally going to get going on Alex Verus #7.  I’ve been looking forward to this one for a while – there’s loads of stuff that I’ve been setting up over the course of books #5 and #6.  Both books were pretty hard to write, and with hindsight, a lot of the reason for that was that I was having to lay a whole lot of groundwork.  Now that I’ve finished with that, I can step on the gas a bit and have fun!

I’m starting to get a clearer idea of the overall story arc for the Alex Verus series.  Not to the extent of knowing the exact length, but I know now fairly exactly what’s going to happen in Alex Verus #7 and #8.  Beyond that it gets fuzzier, but I know more or less what the major plotlines and character arcs will be.  Actually, I’m really looking forward to it.

But I can’t get started on that until I finish the edits for #6 . . . so, back to work!

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Ask Luna #36

From: Wodden

Another question if you would kindly indulge me. It is linked to my previous enquiry regarding Griff and his “earth energy” manifestations. Please feel free to combine your answers, and apologies for sending in multiple related questions.

There are a number of instances where an elementalist creates an elemental effect without the presence of their element in any great quantity – Cinder throwing around beams/blasts/walls of fire, Deleo disintegrating things without the presence of anything more than atmospheric moisture.

However, the encyclopaedia entries imply that a quantity of the element needs to be present and outright says that creating the element in question requires a great deal of effort and energy.

There is also mention of “muscle memory” so, presumably mages could become so proficient at certain “un-resourced” elemental manifestations that they can create elemental effects without a source, but this is an assumption.

I would be most grateful if you could clarify these issues for me, and allow me to express my gratitude at your taking the time to enlighten us.

The basic rule of thumb we get taught is that mages can create energy, they just can’t create matter.

Okay, that’s not really what they say. The real explanation’s way longer than that and involves formulas, and the teachers I’ve talked to seem to get really annoyed when I say ‘creating energy’, since that’s supposed to break all sorts of laws and conservation of stuff and blah blah blah. Bottom line, mages can summon up energy and chuck it at things, which is the important part as far as I’m concerned. What they can’t do is make actual mass. So Vari can summon up fire, because what he’s really producing is heat energy, but Caldera can’t just create earth out of nowhere, because it apparently takes a crazy amount of work to produce even the tiniest piece. So Caldera mostly just uses materials lying around. Same with water and ice mages – they pull ambient moisture out of the air. And air mages obviously have an easy time of it.

The energy vs mass thing is kind of a moot point for me and Alex, since our magic types don’t go anywhere near that, so I’ve never really gone to too much trouble to learn the theory. I mostly just care about what they can do.

From: Dan

Given that you have more and more control over your curse and that it can be used to attack and defend with the focus Arachne gave you. Are you really just an adept? Seems that your powers are more varied than comparable adepts.

You’d think that, wouldn’t you?

Personally, I think what you can DO with your magic is way more important than whether you fit some textbook definition of what a mage is supposed to be. But nobody on the Council’s asking my opinion.

From: Oxon

Hi Luna!

I was wondering if you could elborate a bit on lightning mages, storm mages, weather mages (and weather magic) and the differences between them all. Just pointing me at encyclopaedia entries if you post then would be fine!

Thanks!

Lightning magic is mostly just another term for electricity use. Lightning mages work a lot like fire mages in practice – all attack, no defence, not much utility either. They hit hard, though. Weather mages are focused around natural weather patterns, and what they’re really good at is larger-scale alterations over a period of time. They’re not much good in the duelling ring, but they’re handy to have around. ‘Storm magic’ is one of those vague terms where I’m not sure what it means. Lightning/weather hybrid, maybe.

Lightning magic is related to air magic and to types in the electromagnetic group, while weather magic’s related to air and to water, and sometimes to the heat/cold sub-family.

From: Dan

Hey Luna, hope everythings going well for you. If you arent too busy with your studies would you mind answering a few Questions?

Do you know any of the Myths/Stories from magical society? Do you have a favorite?

Have you heard of Dispel focuses? do you know which Magic type they are?

Have you had much trouble from other people in the apprentice program. I mean they were really really horrible to Anne. Have you been ok? or have you considered dropping out and just going independent. (or Dark)

How powerful is your curse in a duel situation? I know that you have beaten others in azimuth duels but would you be confident to survive a battle with a full mage or a dark apprentice?

1. I know a few of the stories. Mostly my favourites are the ones with the adepts (there aren’t many.)

2. Dispel effects are one of the rare spell types that are pretty much neutral. Not as much so as magesight, but close.

3. Ugh. Hard question. Yeah, there are some that are really nasty. Not as bad to me as to Anne, and not all of them . . . still too many, though. I’m not going to lie, sometimes I’ve thought about dropping out. But I’m getting close to the point where I might be able to pass my journeyman tests. If I can stick it out that long, it’ll be worth it . . . though getting through that hurdle is going to be a whole new problem.

4. I’ve actually beaten a Dark apprentice once. Wasn’t exactly normal circumstances, though, and there’s no way I’d take on a full mage if I could help it.

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Ask Luna #35

From: Regulas1

Luna,

First off I am a major fan of yours and how far you’ve come as an apprentice.

I want to ask your thoughts on Alex as a Mage. He seems guided by self preservation, but if you had to classify him based on his actions would you say he is light or dark?

Cheers,
Regulas

Always nice to meet a fan.

I’d say he’s independent. Remember, just because the Light and Dark mages get all the press doesn’t mean they’re the only ones out there. Loads of mages just go about their lives without aligning with any of the factions. Though it’s true that that’s getting harder and harder these days . . . don’t know how much longer it’s going to last.

From: Geli

Hi Luna,

great to read that all of you are alright.
I’ve read that magic is a reflection of the personality of the mage.
Easy enough to understand.

But then I started to think about Alex. He’s a diviner. Here is what I know so far abour the personality of divners:
– They’re curious.
Now Alex is that, no doubt.
But also:
– Most diviners are hiding themselves away from fights.
Now, that is a sensible choice when you have no real raw power. But that’s on the first glance, the second is: Diviners are great at runnind and avoiding conflict – terrible at fighting. Maybe the diviners are not just hiding away, because they are “weak”, but because they genuinely do not want to play the games for power. So far there has not even been hinted at a “dark” diviner besides Alex. In short, they all seem to be pacifists and their magic supports this.

Now, Alex is on the first glance no pacifist at all. Second glance: he does not want power, takes no joy in politics too. He never attacks. He is essentially a very peaceful person – who just becomes were deadly when attacked. Also, there is this hint that Alex’ father his a pacifist… difficult to bury such things if you grew up with them.

So here is my question: Did Richard “change” Alex a lot more than Alex himself realises? So much, that he became different from the person his magic says he is?

Wish you a great day!

I had to think about this one. I guess the truth is I never really thought about Alex changing. Okay, he’s gotten a bit different since I met him, but I kind of assumed that before I did, he was always the way he was when we first met.

One thing you’re right about – Alex is WAY more of a fighter than most diviners. There are supposed to be some Dark diviners (though I’ve never met one) but there aren’t many, and apart from Alex, I don’t think I’ve ever heard of a diviner getting into a fight at all. They’re researchers and investigators. I hadn’t really considered that that might have been from Richard, but . . . I guess you might be right. Kind of a worrying thought, to be honest.

From: Waddon

Hi Luna,

Just getting into the stories and loving them so far. Some linked/related questions for now about Earth magic. Doubtless more questions will be forthcoming, but I promise not to be as prolific as Orion.

The Encyclopaedia entry on Earth Magic mentions that Earth Mages tend to short-range solutions in combat, such as supernatural strength. However, Griff Blackstone uses “hammers of Earth magic” against Sonder and Yourself. Is this something unusual?

I also assumed that a connection to the elemental source of power was necessary, such as “touching” the element in someway or investing a high amount of personal energy in creating it. Griff seems to do neither.

In fact, the manifestations Griff uses seem more like they would rationally fit in with use of hard-Air magic – slamming attacks, suffocation etc.

So, please can you elaborate on Earth magic a bit more? The Encyclopaedia entry is a bit obscure and as portrayed thus far the manifestations of Earth are less intuitive than I assumed they would be (supernatural strength drawn from the earth, stone-like skin as a protective measure etc).

Your elaboration/explanation would be most gratefully received.

Earth magic tends towards short-range strength and reinforcement, but it doesn’t have to directly involve the ground. While I’ve seen a few earth users who do the Incredible Hulk thing of tearing up the floor and chucking it at people, most of them don’t – they just channel earth energy through whatever they’re holding or using. Also, remember there’s a lot of variation in each magic type. So while all earth spells are in a circle labelled ‘earth magic’, there might not be any overlap between the spells one earth mage can use and the ones another earth mage can use.

In Griff’s case, he was an earth mage with some tendencies towards force magic. He was still an earth mage, so he had the same short-range focus, but he used a traditional shield instead of skin reinforcement and conjured up an elemental melee weapon and similar effects. All of the elemental types have a ‘blade’ spell – usually earth hammers are made out of something physical, but in Griff’s case it was just pure energy. Bit unusual, but nothing you won’t see if you spend a while duelling. The flip side is that he probably couldn’t use stone skin or stone shaping the way that someone like Caldera can. Or maybe he had some sort of substitute. I didn’t exactly have the chance to ask him about his spell list, and it’s not like it matters much now.

From: Katy

How does someone actually become a dark mage? Presumably it doesn’t depend on council recognition like light mages do. Is it a case of if you say you’re one and no-one can stop you, it counts, or a dead man’s shoes thing? The apprentices have to go somewhere. And in the same veins what about independent mages? Thanks

For Dark mages, it’s pretty much a case of whatever you can pull off. If you say you’re a Dark mage, and enough people take you seriously, then you’re a Dark mage. Simple as that. No tests. (Or the test comes afterwards, depending how you look at it.)

As for independents, being an independent isn’t some sort of special club, it’s just the default. If you’re not Light and not Dark, then you’re an independent. They tend to get less respect than Lights and Darks do, so it’s more likely that they’d treat you like an overgrown apprentice until you’d been around a while.

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Kings River Life Review & Giveaway

A nice review of Hidden by Terrance Mc Arthur from Kings River Life magazine.  They’re also doing a giveaway of the book, so check it out if you want a free copy!

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