Finishing with Book 3, Starting with Book 4

First-round edits for Inheritance of Magic 3 are done!  The copy-edits will come in the New Year, but at this point I’m clear to move onto Book 4.

I mention edits quite a bit on this blog, so here’s a brief explanation as to why the first-round edits are important.  Short version:  the first-round edits are where all the big changes happen.  New characters, new scenes, and even full-on rewrites all take place during this step.  Once it’s over, the book is more or less ‘locked in’ – there may be (and in the case of my books, usually are) thousands more changes before the book finally comes out, but all the important stuff is settled.

As such, first-round edits can change the overall feel of the book a lot.  I don’t usually do full-on rewrites of my books (I think in the Alex Verus series, only 2 out of the 12 books got changed heavily enough in the edits stage to qualify for ‘rewrite’ status), but I do do things like changing the conclusion and the book’s overall framing.  So, the same stuff happens, but it’s presented in quite a different way.  Often while I’m writing a book, I only have a vague idea of where the story is going and why things are happening in the way and order that they are.  The first-round edit is where I get to take a step back and look at how everything fits together.

This also means that once the first-round edit finishes, the ‘shape’ of the book is done, and I can look back at it and say ‘okay, I know what this book is about now’.  At which point I can move onto the next book.

Which is what I’m going to be doing!  Everything’s now clear for me to start work on Book 4, so that’s exactly what I’m going to do.  I don’t have a clear plan for Book 4 as yet, so the first stage is going to be to draw one up.  Hopefully I’ll be able to start around the beginning of January, though it might take longer.

With Book 3 done, the first part of the new series is completed.  The first 3 books have ended up forming a sort of mini-trilogy – they cover one phase in Stephen’s life, and by the end of book 3, this phase is at an end.  The current plan is for Books 4 to 6 to work as a similar set of three, though I don’t know for sure if it’ll shake out that way.  We’ll have to see.

As far as the blog goes, I’m planning to use this month to write a few more Beginner’s Guide to Drucraft articles – first one more on Matter Sigls, then I’ll cover the Motion branch (so one article on Motion drucraft in general, then probably two more on Motion sigls).  After that I’ll probably take a break from the branches and cover something else, as it would get a bit tedious for me to do every single branch one after another – I’ll slot in the last three branches later on between other subjects.  Looking over my notes file, this wave was supposed to cover limiters, Houses, and the branches, and I think at this point I’ve done all of them – the next most popular topics were ‘Country Affinities’, ‘Corporations’, and ‘Advanced Disciplines’, so those are likely to be up next.  But I expect that won’t be until February at the earliest!

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A Beginner’s Guide to Drucraft #26: Matter Sigls (I)

Matter sigls work by temporarily altering one of the target’s physical properties.  Over the centuries, drucrafters have consistently found that one of the most useful properties to alter is mass.

Lightfoot

Type:  Triggered/Continuous
Direction:  Conducted (self)
Appearance:  Pale red, swirl pattern
Rank:  D to S

The Lightfoot sigl reduces the wearer’s effective mass by a fraction commensurate with the sigl’s strength.  D-class versions can reduce an adult man’s effective mass by around 20%;  for A-class, the figure is more like 90%, and this can be pushed even higher with A+ and S-class models (though in practice virtually no-one is willing to spend the resources it would take to make an S-class Lightfoot).

One of the most popular Matter sigls due to how widely useful it is.  It makes climbing and jumping vastly easier, and also reduces the impact of a fall.  You won’t get tired as fast while hiking or running (since you’ve got less weight to haul around), and it makes it almost impossible to drown – you’re so much lighter than water that you just bob around on the surface.  Of course, this comes with matching drawbacks – you can’t hit as hard, you can be pushed around easily, and at high levels you can literally be blown away by strong winds – but these can be mitigated by simply turning the sigl off when it’s not needed.

Can be made in either triggered or continuous forms.  The continuous version is generally more useful in challenging situations, but comes with an unusual drawback:  it makes the wielder’s life too easy.  An active Lightfoot sigl means that every movement or physical activity requires less effort from the wielder’s muscles.  If used day after day, this causes those muscles to degrade, similar to the effects of living in a low-gravity environment.  There have been cases of Lightfoot users becoming so dependent on their sigls that deactivating the sigl has resulted in a heart attack.

Lightfoot sigls are generally optimised for wielders of a specific weight.  The heavier the wielder, the larger a volume the sigl will have to affect and the more powerful it will need to be.

Stomp

Type:  Triggered
Direction:  Conducted (self)
Appearance:  Dark brown, swirl pattern
Rank:  D to S

The Stomp sigl is the mirror image of the Lightfoot sigl;  instead of decreasing the wielder’s effective mass, it increases it.  Generally less useful than its counterpart, since the situations where you’d want to be lighter greatly outnumber the ones where you’d want to be heavier.  Most people find the sensation of being heavier to be unpleasant, and prolonged use can place a great deal of stress on the wielder’s joints, especially their knees.  As a result, the sigl is far less popular than the Lightfoot.

There is, however, one situation where increased mass is very useful – when you want to hit someone.  As such, as its name suggests, the Stomp sigl is mainly used by drucrafters who expect to get into hand-to-hand fights.  By flipping the sigl on and off, a Stomp user can build up momentum at his natural weight, then activate the sigl to hit with far more force than he’d ever be able to do usually, and resist any attempts to push him around or trip him.  (Of course, if he does get tripped while the sigl’s active, it’s really going to hurt.)

The Stomp sigl is almost always shaped to be triggered and is virtually never made continuous, since no-one except for an astronaut or a real masochist would want to be heavier all the time.

Featherweight

Type:  Triggered
Direction:  Conducted
Appearance:  Pale red, swirl pattern
Rank:  D to S

A variation on the Lightfoot sigl designed to affect objects rather than the wielder.  Useful for carrying heavy loads or lifting large objects.

As with all Matter sigls, the change to the physical property fades rapidly (but not instantly) once the effect ceases, allowing for uses where the wielder throws an object which then reacquires its mass once it’s already in motion.  It also works perfectly well on people, though much more slowly – not much use if you want to move someone against their will, but very helpful for rescue situations where a responder needs to carry someone who’s hurt or unconscious.

Featherweight sigls see heavy use in the aerospace industry.  By reducing the effective mass of an airframe, an aircraft’s power-to-weight ratio can be dramatically altered, boosting its range and agility.  The sheer size of most aircraft acts as something of a limiter on this;  most Featherweight sigls are only capable of affecting ultralights and similarly small craft.  However, A- and S-rank Featherweight sigls can affect much larger targets, and the air forces of various nations use these sigls to enable aircraft to carry out a variety of interesting (and highly classified) missions.

Lighten

Type:  Continuous
Direction:  Conducted
Appearance:  Pale red, swirl pattern
Rank:  C to A

The continuous version of the Featherweight sigl, Lighten sigls are designed to interface with a specific object, usually something heavy that can be worn on the body.  The sigl reduces the object’s effective mass, allowing the wielder to carry it around much more easily.  The object that a Lighten sigl is intended to work with is generally purpose-built to be compatible with the sigl – the idea is to make it as idiot-proof and low-maintenance as possible.

Most commonly used by people expecting to operate with limited support in harsh or dangerous environments:  explorers, first responders, soldiers, etc.  Typical targets for this sigl are sets of body armour, heavy-duty backpacks, hand-held machinery, etc.  The cost of a Lighten sigl is usually many times greater than the equipment it affects, so it only makes sense to use this sigl in situations where you can’t just send along a second man to carry the equipment the normal way.

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An Instruction in Shadow – Signed Hardback Edition

I had been planning to do the first Matter Sigls article this week, but a few people have been asking for signed copies of An Instruction in Shadow, and I promised that I’d let them know when they’d be available, so here they are!

The Broken Binding is selling signed hardback copies of An Instruction in Shadow here.  Note that while they have copies available while I write this post, I’ve no idea how long that’ll last, and I only signed 500 of the things.  So it’s first come, first served!

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Edits Month

Book 2’s release is now solidly in the rear view mirror, and I’m in the middle of the edits for Book 3.  They’re minor in terms of total word count, but fairly major in terms of the amount of effort I’m having to put into them.  The problem with rewrite-type edits is that each thing you change has knock-on effects everywhere else, meaning that you have to keep everything in your head at once so that you have some idea of what the new version is going to look like.  It’s fairly demanding.

On the plus side, while it’s hard work, it’s not that time-consuming, so I’m still expecting to make my end-of-month deadline.  I’m going to be pretty busy until then, though!

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A Beginner’s Guide to Drucraft #25: Matter Essentia

Matter is generally considered the second-most straightforward branch of drucraft (Light being the first).  Long associated with craft and industry, it is perhaps the best-understood of all the branches.

Capabilities

Matter drucraft is focused around altering matter by changing its physical properties.  The properties that Matter drucraft can alter include, but are not limited to:

  • Hardness
  • Mass
  • Density
  • Melting point
  • Boiling point
  • Strength
  • Brittleness
  • Plasticity
  • Reactivity
  • Conductivity
  • Transparency

The more powerful the Matter sigl, the larger the volume of matter that it can affect, and the greater the magnitude of the change to the physical property that it can produce.  Some Matter sigls are designed to only affect a part of the object in question, but most are designed to be ‘conducted’, so that they spread their effect out over the entire object.

The change produced by a Matter effect is temporary.  A Matter sigl can’t truly double the mass of an object – to do so, it would have to create the mass out of essentia, which would take an absolutely enormous amount of energy.  Instead it ‘boosts’ the physical property in question – it doesn’t actually make the object heavier, it just makes it behave as though it’s heavier.  Some drucrafters describe this as ‘tricking’ the universe into thinking that a substance isn’t what it is;  others view it as more like creating a small localised field within which the laws of physics behave slightly differently.  Still others view it as like ‘lending’ or ‘borrowing’, where an aspect of an object is temporarily swapped out.  In any case, a Matter effect is best viewed as a sort of temporary aberration that is sustained only by the drucrafter continuing to pour essentia into it.  As soon as the supply of essentia ceases, the Matter effect fades.

Despite this limitation, Matter drucraft is enormously useful in industry.  There are many industrial processes that work after a fashion, but would work much better if only the material in question was just a little more malleable, or a little lighter, or conducted electricity more easily.  Matter drucraft can fix all of these problems – only temporarily, of course, but with a little ingenuity, a temporary change can go a long way.  As such, Matter drucraft is in great demand in industry, particularly in processes involving small amounts of high-value materials.

Although Matter and Life are separate branches, Matter drucraft can affect living matter – it just does so in a very different way than Life drucraft does.  Still, Matter drucraft does have some very useful medical applications (particularly in surgical procedures involving teeth and bones) and it’s common for medical drucrafters to have a few Matter sigls alongside their Life ones.

Strengths and Weaknesses

The main drawback of Matter essentia is its temporary nature.  Note however, that while a Matter effect may be temporary, its consequences aren’t.  A hardness-reduction effect may only last for a minute, but if that minute is used to sculpt the object into a different shape, the effective consequences last forever.

A less-well-known drawback to Matter effects is their speed.  Most Matter effects take a while to permeate through the matter in question, and the change that they produce is gradual rather than instant – less like a light switching on, more like a piece of metal heating up when thrust into a fire.  This can, however, be circumvented if the target is sufficiently suffused with the wielder’s personal essentia.  As such, while Matter effects targeted on objects or on other people are slow, Matter effects targeted on items carried or worn by the wielder are significantly faster, and effects targeting the wielder’s own body are fastest of all.

This slowness also applies to Matter shaping.  Crafting Matter sigls is a notoriously slow process, far more so than any other branch.  This is rarely a problem for an experienced Matter shaper, but does cause issues when drucrafters who learned to shape on other branches move to Matter, often leading to numerous botched sigls until they adapt.

Associations

Matter essentia is associated with craftsmanship, engineering, agriculture, the earth, metal (especially iron), industry, and war.  Its associated celestial body is Mars.

Distribution

The countries most known for Matter Wells are Germany and China – China produces by far the greater volume, but the very strongest Matter Wells are found in Germany.  Other countries with strong showings in Matter include Taiwan, the UK, the USA, Russia, Switzerland, and Mauritius.

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Back to Normal

Now that the excitement of the new release is over, things are going to quiet down again as I go back to my regular routine.

Edits on Book 3 of the Inheritance of Magic series arrived last week, and I spoke with my editor about the changes.  The good news is that the changes they’re asking for are all quite minor, so I don’t expect they’ll take a gigantic amount of time or work – my editors were asking for the edited manuscript back by early December, and I’m personally hoping to get it done by end of November.  Once that’s done, I’ll send it off to them and the book will start down the road to copy-edits, proofreading, and eventually publication.  (For the curious, the book is now at Step Five in the publication process that I wrote about here.)

After that’s finished, it’ll be about time to start Book 4 – I’m hoping to start around the beginning of the new year.  All of this means that my ‘holiday’ period is now finished – for the foreseeable future, I’m going to be busy either with editing the current book or starting the new one.  So, back to normal!

As for the website, we’re going to be going back to some Beginner’s Guide to Drucraft articles.  Next week will be an article on Matter essentia, and after that I’ll write one or two articles about Matter Sigls.  I doubt I’ll do all six branches right now, but Light and Matter have been two of the more important branches for Books 1-3, so it makes sense to focus on them.  After that, I’ll have to go back to the results of that poll I did to decide what to do next!

 

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A Beginner’s Guide to Drucraft #24: Light Sigls (II)

A further overview of Light sigls.  This section concentrates on one of the most coveted and widely used powers of Light drucraft – invisibility.

Diffraction

Sub-branch:  Manipulation
Type:  Triggered
Appearance:  Blue, transparent
Rank:  C to B+

Bends visible light around the subject, creating a bubble that light cannot enter.  Some diffraction sigls do this by directly bending the light rays, while others temporarily alter the light’s wavelength for long enough for the wielder to hide in the ‘trough’ of the wave.  The second approach is usually considered more elegant, but the first is simpler to do.  Since the light is bent, rather than suppressed (as happens with negation sigls) anyone looking at the wielder sees whatever is behind them.  This allows for ‘true’ invisibility, rather than creating shadows or darkness.

Diffraction sigls are by far the cheapest of the true invisibility sigls, but they come with significant drawbacks.  First and most obviously, diffraction sigls stop ALL visible light from reaching the wielder . . . including the light that would have reached their eyes.  This means that a diffraction sigl, used on its own, blinds the wielder.  Some diffraction sigls attempt to remedy this by allowing a small amount of visible light to reach the area around the wielder’s face, but this still hampers vision, and also means anyone looking at the wielder will see what looks like a disembodied head hovering in mid-air.

A more effective solution is to have the diffraction sigl exclude visible light, but not other frequencies.  (This is normally going to be the case anyway, as the average diffraction sigl doesn’t have the power to screen out the entire electromagnetic spectrum.)  The diffraction sigl can then be paired up with some sort of vision-enhancing effect to let the wielder see in the ultraviolet or infrared range.  This is fairly reliable, but does mean that the wielder has to pay for two sigls instead of one, both in terms of money, and in terms of essentia capacity.  Sigl providers are notorious for selling diffraction sigls at what seem to be reasonable prices, then gouging customers on the vision sigl that goes with it.

Even once the vision problem is solved, diffraction sigls are by no means perfect.  Since the diffraction effect tries to bend light around the wielder, they run into problems when the light’s new course would take it through an opaque object, such as the ground – anyone looking closely at the feet of someone using a diffraction sigl will notice something odd.  For similar reasons, the diffraction field works poorly at close range – the closer a viewer comes, the more they’ll be able to make out a sort of ‘goldfish bowl’ distortion.  Both of these effects are much more noticeable in bright light or if the wielder is moving, and especially if the wielder is moving quickly.  Someone trying to run under a diffraction field in broad daylight may actually be more obvious than if they weren’t using a sigl at all.

Despite these drawbacks, diffraction sigls remain popular.  If you want to be invisible and can’t afford a transparency or active camouflage effect (which most people can’t), a diffraction sigl is usually the only practical option.

Transparency (Matter)

Sub-branch:  Transparency
Type:  Triggered
Appearance:  Pale to very pale pink, transparent
Rank:  B to A

Alters the transparency of the wielder, causing visible light to pass through them.  Often grouped with Light sigls, due to its effect, but this is a Matter sigl and as such is described more fully in the Matter Sigls category.

Active Camouflage

Sub-branch:  Duplication
Type:  Triggered
Appearance:  Almost perfectly clear, with a hint of blue
Rank:  A to S

This powerful sigl intercepts all outgoing light in a similar manner to the Shadowman sigl, but then replaces this light with a copy of the light approaching the wielder from the opposite direction.  So, if the wielder is standing facing north, any light radiating away from their body northwards is instead replaced by a copy of the light coming in from the south.  Thus, anyone looking at the wielder sees what they would have seen if the wielder hadn’t been there.

This sigl is generally considered to be the pinnacle of invisibility drucraft, providing perfect all-round concealment with no disruption to the wielder’s vision.  It is, however, extremely complex and power-intensive, and only the most powerful Light Wells are capable of producing one.

The sigl has no real weaknesses.  It can screen out both visible and invisible parts of the spectrum, and despite its power is only moderately demanding on the wielder’s channelling skill.  Some versions of the sigl struggle to maintain perfect camouflage while the wielder is moving, creating a faint visual distortion in the rough shape of a human body, but higher-quality versions eliminate even this flaw.  However, its price puts it out of range of all but the most wealthy.

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Wrapping Up the AMA

AMA is coming to a close.  For anyone who missed it you can ask questions for a few hours more, then I’ll end things.  Thanks to everyone who attended, it was a lot of fun!

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Reddit AMA is live

My Reddit AMA is live as of now!  If you want to ask me any questions, come drop by!

I’ll be answering questions for the next 24 hours or so.

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Reddit AMA Next Week (22nd October)

An Instruction in Shadow is now out – hope you guys are enjoying it!

My AMA on r/fantasy will start four days from now, on Tuesday 22nd October, 12 noon GMT.  I’ll put up a post and a link when it goes live, then spend the next 24 hours or so answering questions before wrapping things up around noon-ish on Wednesday 23rd.

For those not familiar, AMA stands for ‘Ask Me Anything’ and it’s exactly what it says on the tin.  I use these as general reader interaction and feedback – if anyone has any questions about the books or anything they especially want to tell me, this is their chance.  If you’d like to get an idea of what they involve, here’s my AMA from last year, done right after the release of An Inheritance of Magic.

See you all on Tuesday!

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